Self Critique

A.)

1. 8.5

2. It left me thinking that I needed more scenes to illustrate the full idea of the movie.

3. I felt a sense of wonder to figure out her intentions.

4. I felt that the importance of the initial story is how life can be ironic.

5. The theme I got from it at the end was that we all have the choice to voice and act on our own opinions.

B.)

1. I thought the story was a little vague on my first edit, but just a couple of new scenes and I felt an audience could get the gist of it.

2. The scene of the argument was the most effective to me. The ending could have been better realized.

C.)

1. I can honestly say that it does feel complete now that the final edit is done.

2. 8- I feel like some shots are very weak but with stronger scenes it balances out the bad.

3. The elements that were strong were the close-ups on the characters. The weak were the medium shots and their composition.

D.)

1. I understand the camera I just need to work on angle and direction of camera. I also don’t understand the ND filter to the fullest, but I hope to in the future.

2. I feel that more practice with the equipment will get me to the position that I desire to achieve.

Character: EDiXXX

This is Edixxx's design for his penis.

WildStyle

Both main characters will be writing in this graffiti style.

Examples of mockumentary

Thought some of the elements in this were pretty funny.

My Edit

I really enjoyed working on my edit. It was very hard to understand the color correction and hopefully in the future i can grasp this tool and use it to its fullest potential. It was also a very hilarious process because i was working besides Yubu and we would enter music on certain parts and we felt the cheesiness rise from the ashes. Nonetheless it was still a learning process.